Saturday, July 15, 2017

The End of a Blog

I'm sorry to say that I will be shutting down Nevermind the Furthermore for the time being. Unfortunately, I currently don't have time in my schedule to keep it going. I will, however, still be reviewing the books that I read on Amazon and Goodreads. I just can't post frequently enough to keep an active blog. Any reviews that I've agreed to will still be done, they just won't be posted here. I appreciate all the great authors who have shared their work with me. There have been some unforgettable stories. I hope I've helped spread the word to my readers.

Wednesday, May 31, 2017

Pepper, Pumpkin and the Magical Pajamas by Rita Madison

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Pepper, Pumpkin and the Magical Pajamas is a cute story about a girl who lost her cat. I wish I had more good things to say about it.

The Good: The writing is geared toward young readers and is easy to read. For a child who has a pet or wants a pet the story shows the responsibility that's involved. I also enjoyed the illustrations. They were cute and detailed.

The Bad: The story was very much all over the place. So much happened that didn't need to be explained.  Pepper and her mom went out looking for the missing cat. Pepper and her dad went out looking for the cat. There were flashbacks. Pepper thought about how it would be if she had a brother. What? And the pajamas didn't even show up until the final chapters.

The book would have been half as long if it weren't for all the unrelated content. It was like listening to someone tell a story of something that happened to them, but they add way too many details and I just can't wait for them to get to the point.

The Technical: It would have been nice if the author would have run her manuscript through an editor before publishing. There were several issues with misplaced punctuation. Also, the writer regularly used the word wondered where she meant to use wandered. A professional editor would have caught this glaring mistake and I wouldn't have had to explain it to my daughter while I was reading it to her. 



Despite its issues, my daughter enjoyed the book and read it again after we finished it together. She loved the pictures. She loved the idea of having a cat. And she wouldn't stop singing the poop song that came out of nowhere toward the end of the book.


Saturday, May 20, 2017

Broken Branches by M. Jonathan Lee

 
 
I received an advance copy of M. Jonathan Lee's novel Broken Branches from new publisher Hideaway Fall. It was a very quick and pleasant read. I don't have a ton of time for reading lately, so the fact that I got through it so quickly is a testament to the skilled writing. 
 
The first page of this book was like the opening scene of a movie, taking the reader from the branches of an old tree down to the man sitting underneath it. The writing was skillfully visual. This wasn't an action-packed story, but a subtle mystery which was spread out through the entire manuscript. Every page seemed to bring up another question to add to the great mystery of the Perkins family and the land they owned. 
 
Broken Branches is the type of novel that forces you to flip back through the pages once you've finished so you can catch those little things you missed. In this way it was satisfying to get to the end. 
 
I enjoyed Broken Branches very much. It left little ideas swimming through my head as I read it; wondering what the answers really were. Unfortunately, I felt let down in the end. Only some of the mysteries were revealed. There were events that happened earlier in the story that were never explained. Why did Ian's family hate him so much? This was never explained. There were red herrings all over the place. When I got to the last page I actually flipped through the final afterward to make sure there wasn't an explanation hiding there. 

Although I didn't feel satisfied after the last page, I was happy for the journey. I'm looking forward to the next offering from Hideaway Fall


Wednesday, May 17, 2017

Heritage by Addie Hunter

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Recently I received a paperback copy of Heritage by Addie Hunter for review. This is a young-adult sci-fi novel with a little bit of strong language. I had high hopes for it, but I'm sorry to say that I didn't like it.

The idea behind Heritage is interesting. Some small town high-school students acquired super powers. They don costumes and help their fellow citizens, but they can't tell anyone about it. I enjoyed the contrast between their heroic acts and their day-to-day teenage interactions.

But the execution of this story didn't come off so well. I wish the author had taken more time developing her work and cleaning up the plot. A good editor would have been much appreciated as well. This book was littered with technical problems, omitted words, and run-on sentences.



The most confusing factor was that there were too many characters in the story. Most of the secondary characters could have been condensed into just a few. I had a hard time keeping the names of anyone straight. I had an even harder time remembering which superhero was which high-school student. There were six superheroes. That's twelve names to sort out. Plus all of their friends and some family. It's just too much.

And don't even get me started on the mess of dialogue.

On the positive side, I thought it was cute how the superheroes were so often insecure with their newfound powers. They weren't quite sure of themselves even in terms of the outfits and accessories they'd chosen. And a few of them were very unhappy with the names they'd been given by the media. That was a well thought-out plot point.

Addie Hunter put a ton of information into this short novel. The story is definitely creative, but I don't think the craft is quite there. However, Heritage did end on a high note in terms of action and excitement. I'm hoping that the subsequent novels in the Transcend series will be more concise because this first installment had so much potential.


Saturday, May 13, 2017

Infinite Tuesday by Michael Nesmith

As I said in last week's review, I started a free trial of Audible.com and with it I got a free download of Infinite Tuesday by Michael Nesmith. This review is for that version, read by Nesmith himself.



In this autobiography of the elusive former teen idol, Michael Nesmith looks back on his long life with honest clarity. He tells his story from his attitude toward his time in the Monkees to his part in the seemingly accidental invention of the music video and development of MTV.

Take note, though. This is NOT a book about the Monkees. Michael Nesmith has much more credit to his name than a job that he had decades ago. He dedicates very little of Infinite Tuesday to the 60s pop band that he was once a part of. So, readers shouldn't go into it thinking that's what they're getting.

Most of Infinite Tuesday deals with Nesmith's endeavors in Hollywood. He talks frequently about what he calls "Celebrity Psychosis" which he and others around him suffered from. He weaves an interesting recounting of how he became successful and how he didn't always fit in with the Hollywood people surrounding him. Throughout the book, Nesmith points out his flaws and his many failures. This humanizes him, as he's often thought of as a stoic and successful figure. Of course, there are also his many success stories, as well. I found the whole thing to be inspiring and an encouragement to always persevere.

Obviously, I would have enjoyed Infinite Tuesday simply because I'm a longtime fan of Michael Nesmith, I own many of his post-Monkees albums and books, and I've seen him perform live a couple of times (yes, this is me bragging). But I got more from the book than I'd expected. I learned many things I didn't already know. I appreciated his chapters on philosophy and his spiritual values. In all, I'm very happy to have heard Michael's voice in my ear telling me the story of his life.


Sunday, May 7, 2017

Buddhism: A Beginners Guide Book by Sam Siv

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Last week I started a free trial of Audible.com. I hadn't tried it before because I've been so swamped with review requests I didn't think I'd have any use for it. Then a friend suggested I take the free trial so I could download Mike Nesmith's Infinite Tuesday for free. More on that another day. 

My most interesting find on Audible was Buddhism: A Beginners Guide Book For True Self Discovery and Living a Balanced and Peaceful Life: Learn To Live In The Now and Find Peace From Within by Sam Siv. Through Amazon I was also able to download the Kindle version at a discounted price. This review is for the audio version, which I listened to at work and in my car.
This book contains a basic overview of Buddhism, including the life of Buddha and the various kinds of Buddhism that have developed. It takes a look at all the key concepts and most important teachings, methods, and insights in a way that is easy to understand. Filled with a wealth of common sense and other worldly wisdom, the path to enlightenment is considered. Learn about meditation, mindfulness, happiness, samadhi, nirvana, and all the other important concepts that have helped shape our understanding of reality. Find out about Zen Buddhism and study all the basic elements that make the Buddha dharma so compelling to people of all walks of life.
Before listening to A Beginners Guide I only had knowledge of Buddhism in a general sense. It was a thing that some celebrities subscribed to and even a few people I'd known in college. Buddhism and Zen are words that get thrown around in Western culture without much understanding of their real meaning. A Beginners Guide gives a brief history of the Buddha and clearly outlines the basics of the practice. Siv also tells us how to apply the ideals of Buddhism to everyday life, which is invaluable for anyone wanting to start today.

I especially liked the author's explanation of Karma, which is another word that gets misused a lot. It does not mean, as many people believe, a supernatural form of justice. And now that I understand that I can release my mind of the worry that the guy who cut me off in the construction zone may or may not get his just desserts. 

This is a great guide for anyone considering the Buddhist practice, or just looking for a way to bring peace and acceptance into everyday life. It will give you a general idea of the practice and what you can expect. By the end you'll most likely have made up your mind about whether or not Buddhism and meditation are right for you.

Tuesday, April 11, 2017

Hannah's Moon by John A. Heldt



Hannah's Moon is the fifth in the American Journey series by John A. Heldt. I've had the pleasure of reading two of the other titles. So far I've really enjoyed this creative series. You can read my reviews of Class of '59 and Indiana Belle.

In Hannah's Moon we meet Claire and Ron who are anxious to start a family. They turn to adoption, but the process is long. Then Claire's uncle offers them the unique opportunity to travel to a time when adoption will be easier. He sends them to 1945.

I had mixed feelings about Hannah's Moon. Heldt's story broke my heart right off the bat. I was blindsided by a twist in the very beginning. But the story slowed down significantly after that. There was a lot of talking and not much going on until well into the second half of the book. It did pick up later on, however. The action then sucked me back in. I'm just disappointed that it took so long to get there.

I tend to overthink small details. One of the details that was never explained was why Claire and Ron needed to stay in 1945, travel to Tennessee, and complete the adoption process. Clearly any documents they took from 1945 would be worthless in proving the adoption of a toddler in 2017. If Uncle Geoffrey is so good at forging documents, all they needed to do was go to an agency, start the adoption process, and then go right back to their own time with the child. There was no clear reason to stick around for a court hearing. I understand there wouldn't be any story in that, but it was a loose end in the back of my mind throughout the whole story.

Another detail that irked me involved Claire transitioning into the time period. Rather, I was annoyed that she didn't need to make any adjustments at all. She's a 21st Century working woman. Then she goes back to 1945 and steps right into the role of housewife and mother. Very few modern women would have an easy time keeping a house and feeding their family without modern conveniences. Not to mention diapering a baby without Pampers and baby wipes. But there's no mention of any of that. It would have been nice to see this explored.

Although Hannah's Moon is part of a series, it can be read as a standalone book without any confusion. But I recommend reading American Journey from the beginning because it is an interesting and creative series. If you love time travel novels as much as I do, this is one collection you shouldn't miss.